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Post by karebear on May 15, 2010 10:00:04 GMT -7
POKEMON COORDINATOR Miranda Silverdale. Creative | Shy around boys |Intelligent |Friendly | Carring| GENDER: Female. AGE: 18. REGION: Hoenn HOMETOWN:Fallarbor Town. STARTER: Chikorita. Name: Sheba. GENDER~Female. TYPE~ Grass LEVEL~ 005 MOVES~ Tackle | Growl | Razor leaf | Bullet seed NATURE~ Hyper. ABILITY~ Bullet Seed. EYES: Lime Green. HAIR: Light brown, Normally in a bun. SKIN: Pale. HEIGHT: 5`4. WEIGHT: 115. FACE CLAIM: A Ealier Adult who still has to grow up. She has green eyes and brown hair that is normally up. Her normal outfit consits of a bright lime green tank over a white long slevee. She wears a white skirt and has black leggings under them.Around her neck it a collar much like chikoritas only she can take hers off. HISTORY:Miranda grew up in Fallarbor Town. She was an only child.When miranda was growing up she was an outcast, unlike her other friends she wanted to watch her parents and see what she wanted to do with her life. Her mother was a coordinator and her father was a gym leader. After watching them both doing what she loved she fallowed her mothers foot steps and became a coordinator. When she was ten her mother became Ill and gave her daughter the new chikorita that she had gotten a few days before. That night, Miranda set out for the adventure to become the top coordinator. ITEMS: N/A BADGES: N/A RIBBONS: N/A. BENCH: Chikorita
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Post by lulubear on May 15, 2010 14:28:15 GMT -7
Almost got it all. Its not quiet done yet you still have to fill out your items. When you do I`ll take another look at it alright. Good Job so far though.
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Post by Rock on May 16, 2010 12:18:30 GMT -7
Well while Eeyara does that, I'm gonna pick at the only things I see wrong: Chikorita, at Lv5, only starts off with 2 moves: Tackle and Growl. So Razor Leaf and Bullet Seed will (unfortunately) have to go. Last, Chikorita's ability is Overgrow. You know the abilities from like Pokemon Generation II and up, not sure which games you've played lol. Bulbapedia is a nice site to get info from. But uh, other than that, everything seems fine to me. (Yeah that means that you only get 2 moves for now with Chikorita)
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